Monday, September 27, 2010
Blue Sox 3rd edition
This year was going to be my third year of St.Cloud Blue sox travel baseball, and I wanted it to be special. I was determined to have a great year, no my best ever year. My first two years of Blue sox were average. My very first game I had three hits and I just took off from there. The St.Cloud Blue sox began in 2006 with just one team and it took off from there. In 2007 it moved to one team for each age group from 9-15 years old. In 2008 I thought I'd join. I was on the 11 year old team and I was pumped. I ended up having an average year, but I had a lot of fun. The next year I was on the 12 year old team,and I had a little better year. But in my third year on the 13 year old team I broke out in a big way. I picthed almost every game. I didn't only pitch i PITCHED! I hit in the 3rd spot most of the year. I led my team in hits, on base percentage, innings pitched, era, and strikeouts thrown. I great year if you ask me. Until next time this is BIB. Stay sporty.
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you must be really really good baseball player!
ReplyDeleteGood job on your blog! No spelling errors, and good punctuation!
ReplyDeletei thought it was really good but, find a better way to say it took off because you used it twice. :)
ReplyDeleteNice, and who called you bib in the first place?
ReplyDeleteYou repeated a few things more than once otherwise it's good.
ReplyDeleteYou did good in school ball too. Good job on the blog, i didn't see any errors, you should talk about some of your games.
ReplyDeleteA couple typos - and some repetition. I'd like you to focus on one thing- instead of lumping all your years together. Pull out one of these games and discuss in detail.
ReplyDeleteHey Bib ........... BENNY AND THE JETS!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletePretty good, Aaron, but you could add more detail and check how many times you say some stuff.
ReplyDeleteI'm commenting here for your book report...no room up there... In liking your book- try to use some support for what you say, and that will decrease the repetition. You keep saying it's good and find all kinds of clever ways to say the same thing - give examples or discuss pieces.
ReplyDeleteHi what up millions of craved fans i'm back in the saddle again!
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